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Tried some new style of detail and perspective. I kind of like the outcome, although the hair still seems a little off, but I don't want to do the trouble fixing it...

To Agacross
Heya, if you see this, yes I loved your zelda drawing too much so I had to do a similiar perspective, the hand looks almost the same, the reason is: I couldnt do it another way. I didn't trace it, actually.

I'd like critiques, so just out with everything!

Reason she's got teeths sticking out of her mouth is because she's mutated or something, so no, she's not a vampire!

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Fixed hair and added a BG! Any thoughts?
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:iconmiloshjevremovic:
MiloshJevremovic Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Student Digital Artist
very nice ;)
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roamingtigress Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012
What a great piece. I love the perspective of hand, as well as the colouring and detail.
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MANJY Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2010
omg lovely colouring!! i love the detail on the dress!!! but her faraway hand looks a bit odd... a little too straight or maybe the shape of the forearm is not convincing enough. and as for the fingers on her close up hand, the proportion is a little off. have the index finger bigger i would say. and maybe add some knuckles sticking out between the fingers. one final thing, her neck seems a bit too far back maybe, move it slightly forward next time and leave some more gap between her neck and her chest.

hope u found this useful!!! i know u hate drawing hands but this is rly good! i doubt i could have done any better!
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:iconalantyn:
Alantyn Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah, thank you! I did some fixes, just haven't uploaded it :] I guess I really should pratice drawing hands.
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MANJY Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2010
weee. ur welcome! haven't been talking to u for ages!
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:iconalantyn:
Alantyn Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah, just been lazy and busy playing games -.- Too lazy to even post on forums or doing homeworks <_<
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MANJY Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010
oooo! i love games too!! haha! watcha playing? wat sort of games do u like?
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Alantyn Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I play RPGs/MMORPGS and Shooters. Just started playing Allods a few days ago ^_^
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MANJY Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2010
o i LOVE rpgs!! my fav. and hack and slash ones r pretty good as well! but i suck at any type of shooting game...
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:iconalantyn:
Alantyn Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
heh ^^ Anyway, I don't think I've asked, are you a boy or a girl?
The question just came to mind, not like it matters anyway. But... my guess is.. you're a guy. Seriously I have no idea. OH, I am so sorry if I guessed wrong x_x' or I should be sorry cuz I don't know. Eh, sorry for both <_<

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Amritzer Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2010
Its beautiful ;D
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:iconalantyn:
Alantyn Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you, glad you think so : ]
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SPGenX Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
the changes yo made..made a world of difference i like the soft red background and her dress leads somewhere now i love it...the hand doesnt bother me as much anymore too..
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:iconalantyn:
Alantyn Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you =]I am glad you liked it!
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SPGenX Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
im glad you listened and inproved
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SPGenX Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
.:Returning the Critique:.
Well first off, i like the originality and the colors you decided on the black really brings out her eyes....
now for the improvements..the dress kinda like folds into this blackness..where lighting would and should be on the legs...her fingers should of been more thought out considering they are the biggest things in the picture and in the center...i like the level of detail in the dress..but you should of brought some more to the face...and there's this strand of hair by her nose that just doesn't look right its like a upside down Y and hair does fall like that unless u got a bad haircut...i like the lips...wish i could see a bit more of the teeth though..and this is just to help you in the future.. but the end of the hair looks like you drew then erased with this huge brush with low opacity and it kinda stole away some of the detail that i want to see...p.s. might want to start looking into doing backgrounds as well....but overall i like where you were trying to go with this...
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:iconalantyn:
Alantyn Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you ! Suprise, never thought you'd return a critc, thanks once again.

Yes, you're right about everything :P I suck at drawing hair, so thats why I used a mega brush just erasing the hair so it could look a little more flowy, but I'll clean it up. About the hand, hands are also something I FAIL at, so I wont edit it and leave it as it is. I will try fixing some things you said, some I'll leave them as they are.

It's great that you are so thorough, and I am looking forward for more of your critiques =)
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SPGenX Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
no problem
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Yanagikou Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i love this pic and the perspective is quite hard to do, so congrats that u managed to do it right^^

however, her hair seems a bit of ^^; to much of it i think ...
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:iconalantyn:
Alantyn Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hah, yeah, probably. I'll erase some when I've got the time. Thank you!
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Yanagikou Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you re most welcome^^
normaly i never do critics as i don't know how ppl react to them, but since u required some...well i think it shows professionalism when one can handle (good) critics^^
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:iconalantyn:
Alantyn Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I always welcome critics with open arms =O Critics is gold for an artist, so I dont think you should be afraid giving them.
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Yanagikou Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
haha you re right about it^^ i love them too
but some ppl just don't get it, they hate to be criticised O__O
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Alantyn Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
True, and it kinda feels wrong to hurt their feelings right? Sometimes I can get really hyper and criticize everything I think that can be improved XD At worst they'd never speak to me again ._.

I've read that the trick giving critics without getting the artist at you is pointing out the things you like first and last, put your critics in the middle.
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Yanagikou Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ah that's a good adwise thank u^^
(ups, that means i have done it wrong in your case ^^; )

yeah, i've had such cases as well...even if you try to formulate it as friendly as possible they still can get pissed at you -.-
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Storm-is-king Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2010
i don't know if its cause shes a mutant or something but her hands looks rly choppy in my opinion. also the ends of her hair could be longer and more flowing like the rest of her hair, bug i really loved the drawing all in all :D
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:iconalantyn:
Alantyn Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Heh, Thank you! About the hand, yes I noticed after you mentioned it ;P No, its not cause shes mutant, I just forgot to clean it XD
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Storm-is-king Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2010
haha ok lol
well its still great as i said :3
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Nicoldrin-7 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2010  Hobbyist
fantastic shading and color choices, but I think the far hand is a bit small.
and the hair maybe bgs you because it's a little too... thick? it looks a bit... yep, odd... too thick, I think there is just too much hair on her face!

either way, though, it's very fantastic!!
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:iconalantyn:
Alantyn Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you =] Yeah, she's got quite much hair ._. hairy bastard XD
I dunno how I could fix it tho, maybe leave more empty space and holes in the hair?

By the way, sorry, I had to finish this before starting on Suou, I'll probably draw her this week! =]
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Nicoldrin-7 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2010  Hobbyist
*looks at fixed version* that is better!!

it's quite alright~ I probably won't have a lot of time until the weekend, anyway. and my tablet went boom D|
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